My feedback was very positive. The commends made on my pitch were very uplifting and someone even told me that it was the best pitch they had ever seen due to the clear outline. I am very analytical and saw some things that I can improve on, so I hope this one is better than the prior.
Hey Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI can definitely tell some differences when I watch both this new video and the other elevator pitch. You are definitely more clear with your words and speak with more confidence. I could also tell that you looked at the camera a lot more this time that the last, and you used more hand gestures. Overall, great job!